I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Captain's Log, Supplemental
Margaret Daley tagged me! I am supposed to tell where I was 10-20-30 years ago.
10—I was living with six other Christian women in a four bedroom rented house in Santa Clara, and I had just met Captain Caffeine and started playing volleyball.
20—I was starting my Sophomore year in high school. I had joined the Speech Team and was competing in Storytelling.
30—I was five years old. I don’t remember much from that time except that we moved into our new house, which is my parents’ current house, and I got to see my bedroom when it was just a chalkmark on the concrete foundation.
I tag Ronie, Christina, Vader’s Mom, and the Dynamic Uno. It was started by Mary DeMuth, so blame her. :)
Margaret Daley tagged me! I am supposed to tell where I was 10-20-30 years ago.
10—I was living with six other Christian women in a four bedroom rented house in Santa Clara, and I had just met Captain Caffeine and started playing volleyball.
20—I was starting my Sophomore year in high school. I had joined the Speech Team and was competing in Storytelling.
30—I was five years old. I don’t remember much from that time except that we moved into our new house, which is my parents’ current house, and I got to see my bedroom when it was just a chalkmark on the concrete foundation.
I tag Ronie, Christina, Vader’s Mom, and the Dynamic Uno. It was started by Mary DeMuth, so blame her. :)
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Margaret
I did it---here's my link:
http://misadventuresofthedynamicuno.blogspot.com/2007/10/ive-been-tagged.html#links
Heather aka Dynamic Uno :)