I just finished writing Year of the Dog ! It had a massive plot hole that I had to fix which turned out to be more work than I expected. Here’s a snippet: “Hey, Auntie Nell.” He wrapped his arms around her, bussing her on the cheek and breathing in pikake flowers and shortbread cookies. And suddenly he was nine years old again, and her solid presence had made his chaotic world stable once more. “What are you doing here?” He usually took her to dinner on Wednesday nights, but today was Tuesday. The edges of her smile faltered a little before brightening right back up again. “What, I can’t visit my nephew?” She angled around him to enter his home. “Is this your new house? Looks lovely.” Which was a blatant lie, because the fixer-upper was barely livable, much less acceptable to a neat-freak like his aunt. She also left four matching pink and purple floral suitcases on the stoop behind her. Only then did Ashwin notice the cab driver standing slightly to the side of the walkway. “Can ...
Just Jane by Nancy MoserUnable to find her own Mr. Darcy, she created him.
Jane Austen lives simply in the English countryside with her beloved family, entertaining them with her stories and seeking romance. She never ventures far from her own corner of the world and struggles to find her place in it. Growing up in a clergyman's home gives Jane opportunities to observe human nature at its best--and worst.
Vivid and delightful characters pour from her pen--Elizabeth Bennet, Fitzwilliam Darcy, Emma Woodhouse, Fanny Price, John Willoughby ... Jane dreams of publishing her stories and sharing them with the world, but she's just Jane from Steventon, isn't she? Will anyone ever read her novels?
In this moving and authentic portrayal, Christy Award-winning author Nancy Moser transports readers back to the life and times of the literary world's possibly most beloved heroines.
Camy here: This was a very enjoyable novel. As an Austen fan, I was very anxious to read it, and it did not disappoint.
At first, the first person present tense was a bit hard to reconcile with the fact it’s a Regency-era historical novel—it seemed odd when I’m used to third person past tense in my historical romances. However, I soon got used to it, and it gave the story more of a feeling of being in Jane’s head as things happen to her, feeling her immediate emotions and seeing her immediate thoughts.
There are a few scenes in the first quarter of the book where the story meanders—I don’t know what the purpose of the scene was, making for slow reading.
There are also parts where the voice of the character isn’t Jane’s. I know the author purposefully didn’t try to match Jane’s novelist’s voice, and an author’s writing voice is usually not like her speaking voice. However, I would have wanted the narrative to have more consistent adherence to Jane’s voice in her letters, and at some points it seemed a bit too modern and a little uncharacteristic.
The ending is not as traditionally climactic as other novels, but I found myself grinning like an idiot because of the subject matter. The facts about Jane Austen’s life that follow the ending are also neat to read.
The majority of the novel is intriguing and entertaining. I especially liked being able to see how Jane’s observations and experiences made their way into the novels I’m so familiar with. The vignette about Jane’s aunt’s false-bottomed chest, for example, that was slipped into Northanger Abbey, is both cute and funny.
The novel is rich with emotion, which will please many women’s fiction fans. The historical setting permeates the story, which will appeal to historical fiction and historical romance readers.
I found this book very enjoyable and informative about my favorite author. I’m so glad Nancy Moser took the risk to write this wonderful novel.
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