Friday, July 30, 2010

Excerpt - ABIGAIL by Jill Eileen Smith

Abigail
by
Jill Eileen Smith


What price must she pay for true love?

Her days marked by turmoil and faded dreams, Abigail has resigned herself to a life with a man she does not love. But when circumstances offer her a second chance at happiness with the handsome David, she takes a leap of faith to join his wandering tribe. Still, her struggles are far from over. How can she share his love with the other women he insists on marrying?

Abigail follows the bestselling Michal and continues Jill Eileen Smith's rich story of David's wives.



"With skill honed by years of historical research, made sharper still with a gifted passion for storytelling, Jill Eileen Smith crafts the story of Abigail in a way that takes us deep into the heart of King David and into the heart of a woman determined to follow God's will, no matter the cost to her—or to the man she loves."—Tamera Alexander, bestselling author of From a Distance and The Inheritance

"Smith's writing swept me back to ancient days and brought Abigail and David's love story vividly to life."—Deborah Raney, award-winning author of Almost Forever and the Clayburn Novels

"A rich tapestry of an era filled with love and longing that rings true across the centuries."—Siri Mitchell, author of Love's Pursuit

Excerpt of chapter one:

P a r t I

Now Samuel died, and all Israel assembled and mourned for him; and they buried him at his home in Ramah. Then David moved down into the Desert of Maon. A certain man in Maon, who had property there at Carmel, was very wealthy. He had a thousand goats and three thousand sheep, which he was shearing in Carmel. His name was Nabal and his wife’s name was Abigail. She was an intelligent and beautiful woman, but her husband, a Calebite, was surly and mean in his dealings.

1 Samuel 25:1–3


Maon, 1017 BC
•1•
“Rumor has it David is in the area not far from here. If you but say the word, Father, we could leave Simon for good and join him. I hear he has women and children in his company now. Mother and Talya and Abigail would not be out of place.”

Abigail nearly sloshed water over the sides of the bowl as she stood in the courtyard straining it through a cloth for to- morrow’s washing. Her brother’s oft-repeated plea shouldn’t surprise her. She’d heard it many times in the past two years since the king’s son-in-law had run off and surrounded him- self with disgruntled men. So why did the thought cause her heart to beat faster and her limbs to tremble now?

“Ah, Daniel. Always you bring my failures before me.” Her father’s exaggerated sigh carried to her from the roof, where her parents, Daniel, and his wife Talya sat talking in the early light of the moon. She could imagine the slight shrug of his weary shoulders, the look of defeat in his eyes. Why did her brother insist on pushing his point? If he wanted to run after David so much, then go! But leave her father, leave all of them, in peace.

“You have not failed, Judah. You are a good husband, a loving father.”

“Yes, yes, you need not appease me, dear wife. Every day I watch my Abigail grow lovelier, and do you not think I regret what that man will do to her spirit once she lives under his roof? Ach! You mustn’t tempt me, Daniel. To run away . . . It is far too appealing.”

Silence followed the comment. Abigail sucked in a breath, disbelieving. Was Abba actually tempted to do as Daniel suggested? He’d never indicated such a thing in the two years since her childhood betrothal to pay off her father’s debt—a betrothal made before she had reached her full maturity, before her womanhood had come upon her. She fingered the sash at her waist, her heart thumping an erratic rhythm. The change had been late in coming, but six full moons had passed since then. Six months of knowing her betrothed could come at any moment.

“But Father, if you know things will only get worse when Abigail marries that fool, why let her? Surely there is a way to stop this, to undo the damage before it is too late.” Daniel’s voice dropped in volume, and Abigail strained to hear. She crept closer to the stairs leading to the roof and placed one foot on the bottom step.

“There is nothing to be done. Don’t you think your father would have gotten out of the agreement if he could?” The voice of her mother, Naamah, was stern as always, giving Abigail a measure of hope. Her father would not give her to Simon’s son Nabal if he truly feared for her future. He would have gone to the elders, found some other way to pay Simon off—something. “But I’ll admit, David would be a far better master than Simon of Carmel.”

Her mother’s admission, so unprecedented, sent a chill down Abigail’s spine. She gripped the wall for support, her limbs suddenly unable to continue the trek to the roof. Why were they talking like this? Nabal could come at any moment, even this night. How could they even speak of running away? What would become of her?

“Perhaps I could take the case to the elders . . .” Her father’s voice pierced her in its stark uncertainty. Never had he sug- gested such a thing. “They may agree to a termination rather than a divorce . . . Abigail would carry the stigma, though, and I cannot provide for her forever.”

“I will provide for her.” She barely heard Daniel’s declaration above the pounding in her head. Divorce? No man would want her again. She would remain alone and barren, her life wasted.

And what of Nabal? Sudden doubt assailed her. Brash, deceitful son of Simon. The picture of kindness at their be- trothal—but if her brother spoke the truth, the man carried an impulsive, explosive temper. Hadn’t she sensed it in the look he gave her when he took her aside into the privacy of the grape grove at the community wine treading? She pulled in a steadying breath, remembering the flush of shame—and pleasure—she had felt in the moment of his possessive kiss. What began as a tender, heady feeling of love’s awakening had turned aggressive and harsh. She pressed two fingers to her trembling lips.

She couldn’t deny it. Nabal was an attractive man. Of me- dium height, his muscles were not strong like Abba’s or thick cords like Daniel’s, and his hair was darker than her chestnut tresses, black as a goat’s skin, his eyes the color of an onyx stone. Sandwiched between his mustache and beard, his smile brooded something dark, mysterious. She’d heard the way the virgins giggled at his princely manner and flirtatious looks. If she had not known he belonged to her, she might have wondered if he had set his eye on one of them. And the know- ing, the realization that he was bound to her, had made her proud. Someday he would come for her and carry her off on a jewel-bedecked camel to share in the wealth of his estate, to share the intimacies of his love. Intimacies he had already hinted at . . . if she had not pushed him away that day.

She grasped at the fringe of her shawl, cinching it tight, shivering more from the flash of anger she recalled in his eyes than the night’s damp, cool breeze. She’d almost ducked and run from him, but his grip on her arms had held her secure. He wouldn’t have slapped her for refusing him, would he? He would wait for the proper time, until she was truly a woman as she was now. He knew all he need do was come for her. He wouldn’t force her among the grapevines.

She shook her head, determined to clear it of the disturbing thoughts. Father may entertain traitorous ideas of annulling her marriage, but how did she dare? She had already allowed too much . . . and Nabal would collect on her father’s promise one way or another. Of that she was sure.

Lord, help me.

“If we run after David, how will that improve a thing? His enemies are around every corner. We would never know peace again.” Her mother’s words stilled the restless pounding of her heart. Yes, this was what they needed—wisdom—to talk sense into her brother, whose own logic was tainted with liv- ing under the oppression of Simon’s employ. And her father whose weariness grew greater with every passing day, his regret palpable.

“Your mother is right, Daniel. I’m too old to live my life on the run, not to mention what it would do to your mother. We would only slow David down.”

“You are far from old, Father. The freedom alone would renew your strength.”

“Would you have your child born in a cave, my son?” Her mother’s severe tone returned. “Talya is better off here, until she is safely delivered.”

Abigail released her grip on the wall and stepped back onto the stones of the courtyard. The discussion would turn to other things now. Too many infants lined the crevices in the burial caves near their home—brothers and sisters she and Daniel should have shared. Daniel wouldn’t chance his future or Talya’s health after such a declaration. Their mother knew how to get her way.

Abigail’s sandals trod softly across the court and into the small house, and she eased the door shut behind her. Two years she had waited since her betrothal, and now at fifteen summers since her birth, she was ripe with longing for a home of her own. At three and twenty, surely Nabal longed to marry, to procure sons.

When, Lord? When would her bridegroom come for her?

She brushed a strand of hair out of her eyes and pushed aside Daniel’s comments of Nabal’s churlish behavior. When they married, things would be different. She would help Nabal see the error of his ways, gently point out how people lost re- spect for men who were rude or unkind, help him change.

Things would be better. They had to be.

With a heavy sigh, she glanced about the dark room, then settled onto her mat, listening to the muffled voices of her family on the roof. Uncertainty niggled at the back of her thoughts. Everything had seemed so possible until now. Until she had heard her father’s doubts and her mother’s agree- ment. Until the possibility of annulment seemed a reality. Until running away to join a band of outlaws sounded more appealing than marrying her husband.

Jill Eileen Smith, Abigail: A Novel, Revell Books, a division of Baker Publishing Group, © 2010. Used by permission.

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Thursday, July 29, 2010

New titles added to Street Team book giveaway list!

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Tuesday, July 27, 2010

My new cover and new bookmark!

I'm over at Girls, God and the Good Life blog with pics of my new romantic suspense, Formula for Danger, which is out in September! I've also posted pics of my new bookmark, which I just got today!

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Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Excerpt - STARS IN THE NIGHT by Cara Putman

Summerside Press (July 1, 2010)
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ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

A Word From Cara:

I graduated from high school at sixteen, college at 20, and completed my law degree when I was 27.

My writing journey started in 2005 when I decided to write my first novel. Now I have eleven books published with more on the way.

People say I've accomplished a lot and that I must have life by the proverbial tail. Hardly! I grew up as a home schooled kid when home schoolers were misunderstood and oddities.

I struggle with balancing my writing and law career, plus being a good mom and wife.

I often fear people won't like my books.

I've walked through the deep pain of miscarriage.

Really, I'm just like you – I don't have it all together and have gone through tough times. But in His strength, I've discovered a strength I never knew I had. A strength I want you to discover, too.

In the end I'm just an ordinary mom who has seen God do some wonderful things as I've been obedient to step into the calling He's led me into.

Stars in the Night Background

Stars in the Night was an idea that had begun to percolate in my mind. I’d written two World War II series and was actively looking for my next setting. My husband, a huge World War II history buff, and I were kicking ideas around, and I’d decided Hollywood was probably the next place for me. I’d gone to the library and gotten a stack of research books when I got the call. An editor I knew but had never worked with wanted to know if I might be interested in a new line they were starting. As we talked, I got so excited. And then she emailed me their guidelines, which listed that Hollywood was a location they were interested in setting books.

Only God could have known ahead of time. But because I followed His prompting I was ready to run with an idea. Stars in the Night is the result.



ABOUT THE BOOK

Hollywood 1942. When attorney Audra Schaeffer's sister disappears, Audra flies to Hollywood to find her.

Any day Audra might have been flattered by the friendly overtures of Robert Garfield, a real-life movie star. But on the flight from Indianapolis to Hollywood, Audra can think of little else than finding her missing sister. When Audra arrives in the city of glitz and glamour, and stars, and learns her rising starlet sister has been murdered, all thoughts of romance fly away.

Determined to bring the killer to justice, Audra takes a job with the second Hollywood Victory Caravan.

Together with Robert Garfield and other stars, she crisscrosses the southern United States in a campaign to sell war bonds. When two other women are found dead on the train, Audra knows the deaths are tied to that of her sister.

Could the killer be the man with whom she's falling in love?

Excerpt of chapter one:

Chapter 1



One day earlier
Thursday, June 4, 1942



“Well, well, Audra. I do believe you’re ready to take this matter to trial.”

Audra Schaeffer soaked in the atypical praise. While Roger Clarion was a good man and fair boss, he did not toss praise around for any and all to hear. Satisfaction pulsed through her. After seven years of school and two years where the only job she could find after law school required her to serve as a paralegal, Mr. Clarion had given her a chance. If everything went well, she’d litigate her first case in Superior Court Two in one month. A simple case, but it was hers.

He pulled reading glasses low on his bulbous nose and examined her over the rims. “Don’t let me down, or we’ll both be the laughingstock of the Indianapolis legal community.”

“Yes, sir.” The image of her standing at the podium in front of the counsel table, a legal pad resting on it, filled her mind. She’d finally done it! She’d earned the right to try a case.

He smiled then shook his head. “I never thought I’d see the day when I’d have a woman working for me as an attorney, of all things.” After a twist to his bow tie and a tug on his sweater vest, he stood and grabbed the wool jacket hanging on the coat tree in the corner of his office behind the massive cherry desk. “Now get out of here. I understand you have an important call to take back home.”

Audra couldn’t hide the smile that tugged at her lips. “Fortunately, Rosemary’s usually a few minutes late.” Since the day she was born a week late, Rosemary couldn’t be hurried to join the rest of the world. Audra stood and walked to the doorway. “You can’t believe how hard it is to wait for her calls. But it is a blessing her landlady allows Rosie to call us regularly from her phone. I don’t think Mother could handle it if we didn’t have our weekly report on all things Hollywood.”

Mr. Clarion chuckled. “Off with you. Can’t stand in the way of that.”

“See you in the morning, sir.” Audra hurried from the office and scooped her hat and purse from the seat of her desk chair. If she hurried, she’d make the bus that would get her home in time for Rosemary’s call. Being a little out of breath would be worth it if she could steal a few moments with Rosemary without her parents listening. Audra pushed through the front door into the bright sunshine of an early summer Indianapolis day. Squinting against the brightness, she merged into step with the other commuters headed to carpools or buses. The sidewalks pulsed with energy as people hustled to get home to dinner and their families. The United States had only been at war a few months, but already women outnumbered men on the sidewalks.

Audra glanced at her watch and sped up her pace. Her high heels clicked against the concrete as she did everything but run toward the bus stop, one hand squishing her hat securely to her head. Ahead she could see the behemoth belching exhaust as it idled, waiting for passengers. She had to reach it, because she couldn’t miss Rosie’s call.

The last time Rosie called home, she’d been out of sorts. Short. Distracted. Tense. Yet no matter how Audra had tried, she couldn’t pull what bothered her from Rosemary. She imagined her sister doodling nonsense images on a piece of paper as she held close what disturbed her. If Rosie were home, Audra could eventually tease the problem from her and help her deal with the situation. But now, with so many miles separating them, Audra felt powerless and impotent to do anything. How she hated that. She was supposed to smooth out Rosie’s problems, as she had all through high school when the boys decided Rosie was the cat’s meow—her long legs and sweet face attracting them long before she was aware of their looks.

Audra reached the bus and her shoulders sagged. She’d made it. She climbed the steps, deposited her coin, and found a seat in the back by one of the lowered windows. Though tinged with the stench of diesel, the trickle of outside air seemed fresher than that in the bus.

“Is this seat taken?”

Audra looked up and smiled at an older woman. “Please.”

The woman, burdened with a couple bags of groceries, collapsed onto the seat next to her. She fanned her face and turned forward. “I didn’t think I’d make it in time. My kids would have been mighty disappointed if they had to wait for supper while I waited for the next bus.”

Audra smiled politely then turned back to the window. She twirled a strand of hair around her finger then tucked it behind her ear.

Tonight, Rosemary would have funny stories to weave about people she’d observed, stars she’d met, and roles she’d almost landed. The dinner table had been too quiet since she moved to California six months earlier. She’d set her face toward the West and moved, determined to make her mark on the world.

Memories of the many times Rosie had stubbornly set her path before flowed through Audra’s mind. Time after time Audra had stepped in to either help the dream come true or staunch a pending disaster. She hid a chuckle behind her hand at the image of Rosemary’s determined attempt to make the costumes for a neighborhood play one summer. She’d written a script, drafted neighbor kids for the various roles, and then decided nothing less than specially made costumes would work for her production. Only problem was, she’d never sewn a stitch in her life and Mother was visiting a sick relative. That had left Audra to fill the gaps, something she’d gladly done. The play had been a neighborhood smash, the parents overlooking the melodrama and applauding the kids’ efforts. And Audra stood in the background enjoying Rosie’s success.

Similar scenarios had played out through Rosemary’s in-between years. And Audra had loved stepping in to smooth the rough spots in Rosemary’s big plans. She wondered if Rosie had anyone to do that for her now.

Rosemary would call.

Then Mother would smile, and Daddy would lose the tight lines around his eyes.

And everything would return to normal.

And for once, Audra had exciting news of her own to report to Rosemary. Her sister would understand how hard Audra had worked for this opportunity and what it meant to have her own case. Rosemary might aspire to appear on the silver screen. All Audra had ever wanted was to appear in court, weaving arguments that won the day. She had followed her grandpa around his one-man firm for a summer, and the legal bug had bitten hard.

A tremor of excitement coursed through Audra at the thought she would finally get to stand in front of a judge and make the arguments that would determine the outcome for her client. Yes, she had news of her own. Her dreams were ready to come true.

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Thursday, July 15, 2010

Street Team book list Excerpt - MISSING MAX by Karen Young

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Missing Max
by
Karen Young


When baby Max is kidnapped during Mardi Gras, Jane and Kyle Madison’s life falls apart. What their daughter, Melanie, does next is unthinkable.

Max vanished into thin air while in the care of his teenage sister, Melanie. Six months later, the family is a shadow of its former self: Melanie blames herself and is acting out and rebellious; Jane is obsessed with finding Max; and Kyle, a lawyer, struggles to cope with his own grief—and a persistent suspicion that one of his cases is connected to Max’s disappearance.

With her family in turmoil and her marriage on the rocks, Jane thinks things can’t get any worse. Then when an affair and an unexpected pregnancy threaten to tear the Madisons’ lives apart, an anonymous caller leads to a break in the case. Can a second kidnapping bring their family back together?

Excerpt of chapter one:

1

THEY SAY SOME PEOPLE have a premonition about calamity before it strikes. But Jane Madison felt only irritation when her cell phone rang as she waited in the Mardi Gras crowd to order shrimp po'boys. Checking caller ID, she decided to ignore the call when she saw it was Melanie. Her stepdaughter probably wanted to change her order, but after standing in line for more than twenty minutes, Jane was finally up, so changing was not an option.
The man ahead of her received his order of fried shrimp, calamari, and beer. Loaded down, he turned suddenly and almost crashed into her. Not for the first time that day, Jane wished she were elsewhere. Ordinarily, she avoided Mardi Gras Day in New Orleans, but Melanie was at the age to be enthralled by the uninhibited and often near-depraved behavior all too common at the event. So Jane had reluctantly agreed to take her, even though it meant having to also bring Max. The other possibility for Melanie's calling was that Max was awake. If he were, Christine would know what to do. Having her best friend along made the day a bit more tolerable for Jane.
Teething had made Max cranky and restless lately, but so far he'd been surprisingly docile just watching the goings-on around him from his stroller.
Her cell phone rang again. Apparently Melanie wasn't giving up. Now loaded with two large bags and three soft drinks, Jane looked around for a place to set everything down, but there was no open spot, just hordes of people, literally a crush of humanity. Grumbling, she turned back to the vendor's cart and with a murmured apology transferred the load to his counter and fumbled to click her phone free of her purse. Sometimes Melanie could try the patience of a saint. “What is it, Melanie?”
“Mom, Max is gone!” the girl cried. “Come quick! He was here a minute ago, and now he's disappeared!”
Jane shifted to allow an impatient customer access to the vendor's condiments. “What do you mean, he's gone?”
“Just that! Didn't you hear me? He's disappeared.” Melanie's voice caught on a sob. “Hurry! We've looked everywhere, but there are so many people!”
“How could he be gone?” She was used to Melanie's overreacting. Even the girl's friends called her a drama queen. “Let me talk to Christine.”
“She's not here,” Melanie insisted. “A lady fainted and Christine went into the hotel lobby to help and Julie and Anne-Marie were here and we were talking and Max was in his stroller under the balcony just where you left him and then he was gone!” She drew a shaky breath. “Mom, I'm so scared.”
“Christine didn't take him with her?”
“No, no! Listen to me!” Melanie's voice went up another notch. “I'm serious, Mom. He's gone. Someone took him and his stroller and everything!”
Jane felt the first real stirrings of alarm. “Don't leave,” she ordered. “Stay where you are, Mellie. And don't hang up. I'm on my way.” Food forgotten, Jane hurriedly headed back the way she'd come. People took one look at her face and shifted out of her path.
“I can't just stand here and wait, Mom!” Melanie said in a shaky voice in Jane's ear. “We're going to Jackson Square.”
“Jackson—Why?”
“Don't you remember? We saw some policemen there when we were trying to find a place to—never mind, Mom, I'm going there. It's only a block away. I have to hurry!”
Jane barely managed to avoid crashing into a man outfitted in Native American garb, complete with a full feather headdress. With a muttered apology, she skirted around him, keeping the phone pressed to her ear. “I'm a block away, Melanie. Don't go any farther until I get there.”
“There's a cop on a horse! I'm going over.”
“Okay, but don't hang up,” Jane ordered.
Melanie gulped and burst into wild sobs. “Mom, I don't know how it happened! We were all just watching the floats and—”
“Just calm down, Mellie. You can tell me when I get there.” Surely there was a logical explanation. Babies didn't just vanish, although in a teeming crowd, it would surely be easier to kidnap— She stopped herself. She would not go there. She would not think the unthinkable. “Can you see Christine?”
“Not really. I told you, she went into the lobby. I mean, I saw the EMTs trying to get through. The lady who fainted is inside and so is Christine.”
Christine was the practice manager for a team of internists. Although she'd had no formal training as a nurse, she would certainly know what to do if someone fainted. “I can see the EMT unit now, Mellie. I'm going to stop and talk to Christine just to be sure she didn't take the stroller.”
“We saw her run over to the lady, Mom! She didn't take Max.”
“I'll just double-check.”
The sidewalk was choked with people, but Jane finally reached the hotel where the ambulance was now loading the woman inside. Spotting Christine, she tried forcing her way through the crowd, but she was quickly blocked by an EMT.
“Ma'am, you'll have to stay back and let us do our job.”
“I understand, but I have to talk to—”
“I'm sorry, but you can't talk to anyone just now.”
Jane craned her neck to look around him and managed to catch Christine's eye.
Christine's gaze went wide with surprise. “Jane. What is it? What's wrong?”
“Do you have Max?” Jane called over the EMT's shoulder.
Christine looked confused. “Max? No. What—”
“He's gone.” Frantically, Jane surveyed the sidewalk fronting the hotel where she'd left them. It was still choked with people cheering madly as the parade floats lumbered past. There was no sign of Max or his stroller.
“Where are you headed now?” Christine asked. “I need to get my things inside the hotel and I'll come over.”
“Melanie is at Jackson Square. Hurry, Christine.”
“I will.”
Turning, Jane headed in a rush toward Jackson Square, a full block away. In the distance, the three tall spires of St. Louis Cathedral reached high into a sky that was so clear and blue, it almost hurt to look at it. She put a hand to her heart. Please, God, don't let this be happening.
As she pushed through the reveling crowd, she told herself Melanie had to be overreacting. Still, she had a sick feeling in her stomach. The possibility that Max really had disappeared was simply too frightening to be real.
Finally, on reaching the square, she drew a desperate breath, searching for Melanie. How would she find her in this crowd? She pressed the phone to her ear. “Melanie, where are you? Talk to me.”
“I'm on the steps of the cathedral, Mom. Look, over here with the cops. You can see the horse. And I'm waving.”
With a rush of relief, she spotted Melanie standing with three uniformed policemen. Jane quickly headed toward them.
One cop held the reins of a horse, which stood patiently, unfazed by the chaotic goings-on. Melanie's friends hovered near her, looking frightened, their eyes scanning the crowd. As Jane approached, she saw a female officer speaking to one of the cops—issuing orders? With a nod, he quickly mounted, cut through the crowd, and disappeared in the direction of the river. Jane did not want to think of that dire possibility.
Melanie was crying, gesturing with her hands as she talked while her eyes anxiously searched the area. Jane's hope that this was all a mistake faded. Down the block on Bourbon Street, floats lumbered past, but in the parklike square, teeming with hundreds of people, how would they be able to find a baby, even in a stroller?
Like Melanie, her frantic gaze swept up and down the square. But there were so many people, so much confusion. Shops were closed, sidewalks jammed. Streets leading off the square were blocked off to accommodate the crowds. Balconies groaned with the weight of those lucky enough to have access. There was an occasional stroller, Jane noted, but none was a familiar blue with yellow-and-blue-plaid trim. With her heart beating frantically in her chest, she approached Melanie and the cops, two men and one female officer.
“I'm here,” she said, as Melanie launched herself into Jane's arms. Looking over the girl's head, she asked, “What can you tell me about my baby?”
The policewoman spoke. “Are you Mrs. Madison?”
“Yes, yes.”
“Mom, I've told them we shouldn't waste time talking! We need to be looking for Max!”
Jane caught Melanie's arms and angled back enough to see her face. “Mellie, be calm for a moment. Please. Let me talk to these people.”
“I'm Officer Cox, Mrs. Madison,” the woman said, extending her hand. Jane shook it, nodding mutely. “We've talked to Melanie, trying to get details of exactly what happened. She says she and her friends have thoroughly searched the immediate area where the stroller was parked. Meanwhile, NOPD officers have fanned out looking. But maybe there's a logical explanation. She tells us that there was another adult—”
“Christine O'Brian,” Jane said, nodding. “I just spoke to her. She's over there.” She waved her hand vaguely. “Some kind of medical emergency. She did not take Max with her.”
“And there was no one else with you today? No one who might have felt it okay to take the baby?”
“Without asking me?” Jane stared at her. “No, of course not.”
Cox pulled out a small memo pad. “And how old is the baby?” she asked, pen poised.
“Six months. He has b-blue eyes and blond hair.” Jane swallowed, struggling to keep calm. “He's wearing a red shirt and denim overalls. White sneakers. He's in a stroller. Navy blue and blue-and-yellow-plaid trim.”
“Could he have crawled out of it?”
“He couldn't have climbed out on his own. He—” She turned to Melanie. “Max wasn't out of his stroller, was he?”
Melanie's face crumpled. “No, he was asleep. Just the way he was when you left him with me, Mom.” She pressed the fingers of both hands against her lips. “I'm so scared, Mom!”
“We'll find him, Mellie.” Jane squeezed the girl's shoulders gently before turning back to the police officers. “How could a baby in a stroller just disappear?” But even as she asked the question, she knew the answer. The stroller didn't just disappear. Somebody had been watching, and when the teenager and her friends became distracted by the fainting woman and the parade and the sheer frenzy of Mardi Gras, that someone had seized the moment to take her baby.
That was the moment when Jane's concern escalated into terror.
“As I mentioned, I've alerted all units in the area, Mrs. Madison,” Officer Cox said, touching the radio attached to her belt. “I'm sending out a B.O.L.O.”
“B.O.L.O?”
“It means be on the lookout.” She spoke briskly into her radio and received a squawked response that was unintelligible to Jane.
As they stood, isolated by the trauma of a missing child, people milled about enjoying Mardi Gras. Some were in costume, others not. Some were drunk, but most were simply reveling in the abandoned spirit of carnival. Jane's gaze strayed beyond Jackson Square where the river formed the east boundary of the French Quarter. Kidnapping a child on a day meant for celebration was obscene. Had she looked into the face of the person who'd taken Max while mingling with the crowd that day?
“Approximately how long has it been since you actually saw the baby, Mrs. Madison?”
Jane struggled to focus. “Twenty—maybe thirty minutes, no longer. I left to get food.” She looked at Melanie. “How long after I left did Christine leave, Mellie?”
“I don't know. Pretty soon, I guess. You weren't even out of sight.”
“Meaning it could be thirty minutes, give or take,” Officer Cox said. Without stating the obvious, both knew a person could travel pretty far in that much time. Even in this crowd.
“We've got to find him!” Jane felt panic rising in her chest. She stopped, drawing a breath to try to collect herself. With her hand on her heart, she spoke again. “I'm sorry. This is just . . . so—it can't be happening!”
“Please. Come with me.” Cox caught Jane's arm and gently guided her toward the cathedral with Melanie following behind. “Let's get out of the crowd.”
As they headed to the steps of the cathedral, she added in a reassuring voice, “I know you're worried, but there are hundreds of uniformed policemen on duty today. They'll call me if they spot Max. Meanwhile, let's try to reconstruct what happened. There could be a logical explanation.”
“Like what!” Jane cried.
“Someone could have wheeled it away by mistake. Many of these strollers look alike.” The possibility was so ludicrous that Jane didn't bother contradicting her. No parent on the planet accidentally claimed a stroller with a strange baby in it.
Jane's cell phone rang. She clicked to talk . . . hoping, hoping. Maybe, just maybe—“Hello!”
“It's Christine. I'm trying to find you. Where are you?”
“Near the steps of the cathedral. One of the officers is on horseback. You should be able to see him. But Christine, we can't find Max.”
“Are you serious? He's disappeared?”
“Yes. Oh, Christine . . .” Her voice broke. “I can't believe this.”
“I'm on my way, Jane. I'll find you. Meanwhile, I'll be praying.”
Turning from Jane, Cox spoke to both officers standing by. “Head over to the hotel where Max was last seen. Someone there might have noticed something.” The officers nodded and headed out. “I'm here, Jane.” Christine, breathless from running, slipped an arm around Jane's waist and gave her a reassuring hug. “Thank goodness I was able to find you.”
“This—” Jane turned to Officer Cox. “This is Christine. She was with Max and Melanie when I left to . . .” she trailed off, swallowing hard.
“Surely someone saw—” Christine broke off.
“We're working on that now,” Cox said. She refocused on Jane. “Are you certain Max was in his stroller when you left?”
“Yes, of course. I checked to see that he was sleeping. He's teething. I knew if he woke up, he'd be grumpy. He would want . . . me.” Her voice caught. No time to break down now. “So, yes, he was asleep in his stroller when I left,” she said emphatically.
“Mom, let's call Dad,” Melanie said. As always, when Melanie was distressed, she wanted her daddy. Christine slipped a comforting arm around the girl's waist. Jane gave Christine a grateful look. With every passing minute, Jane, too, felt the need for Kyle's support.
“Max was definitely asleep in his stroller when I left,” Christine said.
With the policewoman leading, they all hurried up the steps to the cathedral. The steps were shallow and worn from the footsteps of the faithful and wide enough to accommodate a crowd. A single look at the officer's expression, and people parted like the Red Sea. An attendant standing at the doors moved aside to let them enter.
The sudden hush inside felt almost eerie. Jane glanced toward the altar with its display of religious symbols and quickly turned to focus on Officer Cox.
For some time, Christine, who was active in her church, had been urging Jane to explore the lack of faith in her life, but she'd resisted. It wasn't that she objected on any philosophical grounds; it was just that she'd never found it particularly . . . relevant. Her life was full and . . . well, busy. On Sundays, rather than getting dressed and going to church, she liked to sit around, read the paper, have a leisurely brunch . . . resting up for the demands of the coming week.
She felt suddenly fearful that she might pay a price for her attitude.
“Try to recollect anything unusual you might have noticed, Melanie.” Cox spoke in a calm voice. Jane guessed her tone was intended to steady Melanie and focus her thoughts. “Was there anyone who appeared out of place or was suspicious looking?”
“I-I didn't see anything or anybody like that.” She turned to Anne-Marie. “Did you see anything?”
Her friend shrugged. “What was there to see? We were talking, we were all watching the parade and then—”
“And then Max just . . . disappeared!” Melanie said, her voice climbing in panic. “We have to do something!”
“Tell you what.” Cox touched Melanie's shoulder. “Let's sit down over here to talk. All of you.” With a tip of her chin, she indicated that Melanie's friends as well as Jane and Christine should follow. But Melanie shifted free of the cop's touch.
“We shouldn't be talking at all!” she cried. “We should be looking! We should block off stuff! We should go inside bars and any place that's open! We should stop people and ask if they've seen Max. Whoever took him will get away if we don't do something right now!”
“We are doing something, Melanie,” the policewoman said calmly. “Please. Sit.” She waited while the group reluctantly perched on the edge of a pew.
“The incident has been reported. Right now officers are on the lookout for Max, but we can't ?block off stuff.' It's not possible in this crowd.” Her tone turned brisk. “Now. Let's go over the past half hour once again to be sure we haven't overlooked something. You first, Mrs. Madison.”
Jane drew a deep breath. Inside she felt as agitated as Melanie, and she wondered how long she could keep from falling apart. “We stopped at the sidewalk in front of the hotel, beneath the balcony because it wasn't quite as jammed with people, to watch the parade. I left Max with Christine and Mellie to get some food. There were two friends with her.” She looked at Christine. “Right, Chris?”
“Yes. And the stroller was right there when I left to help inside the hotel.”
“You noticed nothing unusual?”
Christine paused to think. “No. But I was there only another minute or two after Jane went for food. I told Melanie to watch Max and left.”
Cox turned to Melanie. “Tell me exactly what happened from the time Mrs. O'Brian left.”
“It was—” Melanie began with a guilty look at her stepmother. “Some guys we knew were on a float that was passing by, and the parade stopped, right there. You know how it is, everything's moving and then it's not. It was only for a minute, Mom, honest.” Her lips trembled as she met Jane's eyes. “They said when the parade was over that they knew someone on Bourbon Street who had rented rooms with a balcony and they were going to watch the rest of the parades from up there. They invited us too. So then it started up again and they left and we turned around and Max was gone!”
“This is the first I've heard about boys on a float,” Jane said sternly. “Did you forget you were responsible for your baby brother?”
“No, Mom.” Melanie dashed at tears in her eyes. “I swear to you, it was only a few minutes.”
“But long enough for someone to steal Max.” Jane knew her words were hurtful, but her concern was for her baby now, not Melanie.
“Mom, please call Dad! Please. We need him. He'll know what to do.”
Until a few minutes ago, Jane had been hesitant about calling Kyle in case the whole thing turned out to be a false alarm. But now, with her stomach in a knot and her mouth dry with fear, she knew it wasn't a false alarm. She sent Officer Cox a questioning look.
“It might be a good idea to call your husband, Mrs. Madison.”
JANE REACHED KYLE AT his office on Poydras, but it was thirty minutes before he managed to get to the cathedral. They gathered on the front steps outside, where the crowd seemed to have lessened just a bit.
On the phone, she'd been unable to tell him much except that Max had disappeared. He'd wanted details, but there were none. Now his fierce gaze swept past Officer Cox's serious face and Melanie's tear-drenched cheeks to lock onto Jane.
“Has he been found?”
“No.”
He looked stunned. “There has to be a mistake.”
“We've looked—” Jane paused, knowing her voice wavered. “They've fanned out to search, but the crowds are monstrous. They haven't turned up anything. It's as if he disappeared into thin air.”
“That's impossible. He must still be here somewhere. Someone is bound to've seen him. You gave them a description of his stroller?” He glanced at the police officer.
“Of course, Kyle.” Jane rubbed her temple where a sharp pain throbbed.
Officer Cox moved to them, putting out her hand. “Mr. Madison, I'm Sharon Cox, the investigating officer.” With a brief nod, he shook her hand.
“Now that you're here, I'd like to suggest we go to the police substation. It's a better place to talk. Once we're there, I'll explain—”
“I don't think we should leave,” he said in a firm tone. “And what's to explain? We should be combing the area, knocking on doors, questioning people, looking into garages and courtyards.” Glancing outside, he raked a hand over his face. “This is a nightmare.”
“Everything you mention is being done, Mr. Madison. N.O.P.D. is on the scene—has been from the start—but we're hampered by the crowd. What we need now is to piece together exactly what happened.”
“How can you be certain Max is nowhere nearby?”
“I can't say that with certainty,” Sharon said. “But we've found no trace of him. No one has seen anything suspicious.” Like Kyle's, her glance strayed beyond the narthex to the reveling crowd outside. “At least they've seen nothing that might be construed as suspicious beyond ordinary Mardi Gras madness.”
“It's all my fault, Dad!” Melanie cried suddenly.
Jane knew Mellie needed reassurance from Kyle. She needed to hear him say he understood her fear, that he wasn't angry with her. She needed a hug from her daddy. But from the grim expression on his face it didn't look as if she was going to get any such thing. “Max was with Melanie and her friends, Kyle,” Jane explained, trying to keep the tremor from her voice.
“With Melanie?” He frowned darkly. “Why was he with Melanie? Where were you?”
“I went to get us something to eat from a vendor . . . Julie and Anne-Marie were with them—”
“You left our son in the care of a bunch of teenagers to get junk food?”
Melanie made a distressed sound. “Dad, just listen. Please.”
“Hush, Melanie.” Kyle waved the teenager quiet, keeping his gaze laser sharp on Jane. “I'm waiting to hear what happened,” he told her.
“You can't say anything worse to me than I've been saying to myself, Kyle. The kids were hungry. I went to get food. Christine was with them. It never occurred to me that anything like this could happen.”
“Christine?” He turned to glance at Jane's friend then back at Jane.
“There was a medical emergency,” Jane said. “Christine lent assistance. She—” Jane stopped, not wanting to cast blame on Christine or Melanie.
Kyle's steely gaze turned to his daughter. “So how could Max disappear if you were watching him?”
Melanie was crying again. “We—we got talking and suddenly the parade stopped and this float was right by us. There were some guys we knew from school on it. They were laughing and goofing off and everything. They threw us tons of beads and stuff. It was just for a few minutes, Dad,” she said, pleading for understanding. “I know I shouldn't have taken my eyes off Max! But I thought he was safe on the sidewalk right beside me!”
“Clearly he wasn't beside you,” Kyle said.
“But he was only a few feet away, honestly.” She put both hands to her cheeks. “I mean, I don't know how long it was, minutes really, but when we looked, he was gone!”
Jane slipped an arm around the girl's shoulders, trying to console her, while inside she was sick with terror.
Kyle stood with his hands on his hips. “Can you estimate how much time passed before you noticed your baby brother was gone?”
When Melanie seemed unable to talk, Cox spoke up quietly. “We've covered all that, Mr. Madison. The parade stalled for about five minutes, so I don't see how it could have been much longer than that.”
“But more than long enough for someone to take the stroller and melt into the crowd, then head for only God knows where,” Kyle said in a flat tone.
“Possibly,” the officer conceded.
“I'm sorry! I'm sorry!” Melanie cried. “I didn't mean this to happen. I'm so sorry.”
Jane drew the girl closer. “We know, Mellie. And we'll find him. You'll see. We will.” She looked up into Kyle's eyes, her chin tilted. “We will!”
They all turned to look as the cop who'd been mounted on horseback appeared, dismounting and moving reverently toward them. His glance skimmed the Madisons before moving to Sharon Cox. “N.O.P.D. has found the stroller.”
Jane pressed her fist to her heart. “Oh, thank God!”
The cop gave her a sympathetic look. “I'm sorry, ma'am. The stroller was abandoned . . . up on the Riverwalk.” In one hand he held a tiny sneaker. “This is all we found. There was no sign of the baby.”
© 2010 KAREN YOUNG

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Missing Max

A Novel

By Karen Young

Howard Books

Copyright © 2010 Karen Young
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ISBN: 9781416587491



1
 
THEY SAY SOME PEOPLE have a premonition about calamity before it strikes. But Jane Madison felt only irritation when her cell phone rang as she waited in the Mardi Gras crowd to order shrimp po'boys. Checking caller ID, she decided to ignore the call when she saw it was Melanie. Her stepdaughter probably wanted to change her order, but after standing in line for more than twenty minutes, Jane was finally up, so changing was not an option.
The man ahead of her received his order of fried shrimp, calamari, and beer. Loaded down, he turned suddenly and almost crashed into her. Not for the first time that day, Jane wished she were elsewhere. Ordinarily, she avoided Mardi Gras Day in New Orleans, but Melanie was at the age to be enthralled by the uninhibited and often near-depraved behavior all too common at the event. So Jane had reluctantly agreed to take her, even though it meant having to also bring Max. The other possibility for Melanie's calling was that Max was awake. If he were, Christine would know what to do. Having her best friend along made the day a bit more tolerable for Jane.
Teething had made Max cranky and restless lately, but so far he'd been surprisingly docile just watching the goings-on around him from his stroller.
Her cell phone rang again. Apparently Melanie wasn't giving up. Now loaded with two large bags and three soft drinks, Jane looked around for a place to set everything down, but there was no open spot, just hordes of people, literally a crush of humanity. Grumbling, she turned back to the vendor's cart and with a murmured apology transferred the load to his counter and fumbled to click her phone free of her purse. Sometimes Melanie could try the patience of a saint. “What is it, Melanie?”
“Mom, Max is gone!” the girl cried. “Come quick! He was here a minute ago, and now he's disappeared!”
Jane shifted to allow an impatient customer access to the vendor's condiments. “What do you mean, he's gone?”
“Just that! Didn't you hear me? He's disappeared.” Melanie's voice caught on a sob. “Hurry! We've looked everywhere, but there are so many people!”
“How could he be gone?” She was used to Melanie's overreacting. Even the girl's friends called her a drama queen. “Let me talk to Christine.”
“She's not here,” Melanie insisted. “A lady fainted and Christine went into the hotel lobby to help and Julie and Anne-Marie were here and we were talking and Max was in his stroller under the balcony just where you left him and then he was gone!” She drew a shaky breath. “Mom, I'm so scared.”
“Christine didn't take him with her?”
“No, no! Listen to me!” Melanie's voice went up another notch. “I'm serious, Mom. He's gone. Someone took him and his stroller and everything!”
Jane felt the first real stirrings of alarm. “Don't leave,” she ordered. “Stay where you are, Mellie. And don't hang up. I'm on my way.” Food forgotten, Jane hurriedly headed back the way she'd come. People took one look at her face and shifted out of her path.
“I can't just stand here and wait, Mom!” Melanie said in a shaky voice in Jane's ear. “We're going to Jackson Square.”
“Jackson—Why?”
“Don't you remember? We saw some policemen there when we were trying to find a place to—never mind, Mom, I'm going there. It's only a block away. I have to hurry!”
Jane barely managed to avoid crashing into a man outfitted in Native American garb, complete with a full feather headdress. With a muttered apology, she skirted around him, keeping the phone pressed to her ear. “I'm a block away, Melanie. Don't go any farther until I get there.”
“There's a cop on a horse! I'm going over.”
“Okay, but don't hang up,” Jane ordered.
Melanie gulped and burst into wild sobs. “Mom, I don't know how it happened! We were all just watching the floats and—”
“Just calm down, Mellie. You can tell me when I get there.” Surely there was a logical explanation. Babies didn't just vanish, although in a teeming crowd, it would surely be easier to kidnap— She stopped herself. She would not go there. She would not think the unthinkable. “Can you see Christine?”
“Not really. I told you, she went into the lobby. I mean, I saw the EMTs trying to get through. The lady who fainted is inside and so is Christine.”
Christine was the practice manager for a team of internists. Although she'd had no formal training as a nurse, she would certainly know what to do if someone fainted. “I can see the EMT unit now, Mellie. I'm going to stop and talk to Christine just to be sure she didn't take the stroller.”
“We saw her run over to the lady, Mom! She didn't take Max.”
“I'll just double-check.”
The sidewalk was choked with people, but Jane finally reached the hotel where the ambulance was now loading the woman inside. Spotting Christine, she tried forcing her way through the crowd, but she was quickly blocked by an EMT.
“Ma'am, you'll have to stay back and let us do our job.”
“I understand, but I have to talk to—”
“I'm sorry, but you can't talk to anyone just now.”
Jane craned her neck to look around him and managed to catch Christine's eye.
Christine's gaze went wide with surprise. “Jane. What is it? What's wrong?”
“Do you have Max?” Jane called over the EMT's shoulder.
Christine looked confused. “Max? No. What—”
“He's gone.” Frantically, Jane surveyed the sidewalk fronting the hotel where she'd left them. It was still choked with people cheering madly as the parade floats lumbered past. There was no sign of Max or his stroller.
“Where are you headed now?” Christine asked. “I need to get my things inside the hotel and I'll come over.”
“Melanie is at Jackson Square. Hurry, Christine.”
“I will.”
Turning, Jane headed in a rush toward Jackson Square, a full block away. In the distance, the three tall spires of St. Louis Cathedral reached high into a sky that was so clear and blue, it almost hurt to look at it. She put a hand to her heart. Please, God, don't let this be happening.
As she pushed through the reveling crowd, she told herself Melanie had to be overreacting. Still, she had a sick feeling in her stomach. The possibility that Max really had disappeared was simply too frightening to be real.
Finally, on reaching the square, she drew a desperate breath, searching for Melanie. How would she find her in this crowd? She pressed the phone to her ear. “Melanie, where are you? Talk to me.”
“I'm on the steps of the cathedral, Mom. Look, over here with the cops. You can see the horse. And I'm waving.”
With a rush of relief, she spotted Melanie standing with three uniformed policemen. Jane quickly headed toward them.
One cop held the reins of a horse, which stood patiently, unfazed by the chaotic goings-on. Melanie's friends hovered near her, looking frightened, their eyes scanning the crowd. As Jane approached, she saw a female officer speaking to one of the cops—issuing orders? With a nod, he quickly mounted, cut through the crowd, and disappeared in the direction of the river. Jane did not want to think of that dire possibility.
Melanie was crying, gesturing with her hands as she talked while her eyes anxiously searched the area. Jane's hope that this was all a mistake faded. Down the block on Bourbon Street, floats lumbered past, but in the parklike square, teeming with hundreds of people, how would they be able to find a baby, even in a stroller?
Like Melanie, her frantic gaze swept up and down the square. But there were so many people, so much confusion. Shops were closed, sidewalks jammed. Streets leading off the square were blocked off to accommodate the crowds. Balconies groaned with the weight of those lucky enough to have access. There was an occasional stroller, Jane noted, but none was a familiar blue with yellow-and-blue-plaid trim. With her heart beating frantically in her chest, she approached Melanie and the cops, two men and one female officer.
“I'm here,” she said, as Melanie launched herself into Jane's arms. Looking over the girl's head, she asked, “What can you tell me about my baby?”
The policewoman spoke. “Are you Mrs. Madison?”
“Yes, yes.”
“Mom, I've told them we shouldn't waste time talking! We need to be looking for Max!”
Jane caught Melanie's arms and angled back enough to see her face. “Mellie, be calm for a moment. Please. Let me talk to these people.”
“I'm Officer Cox, Mrs. Madison,” the woman said, extending her hand. Jane shook it, nodding mutely. “We've talked to Melanie, trying to get details of exactly what happened. She says she and her friends have thoroughly searched the immediate area where the stroller was parked. Meanwhile, NOPD officers have fanned out looking. But maybe there's a logical explanation. She tells us that there was another adult—”
“Christine O'Brian,” Jane said, nodding. “I just spoke to her. She's over there.” She waved her hand vaguely. “Some kind of medical emergency. She did not take Max with her.”
“And there was no one else with you today? No one who might have felt it okay to take the baby?”
“Without asking me?” Jane stared at her. “No, of course not.”
Cox pulled out a small memo pad. “And how old is the baby?” she asked, pen poised.
“Six months. He has b-blue eyes and blond hair.” Jane swallowed, struggling to keep calm. “He's wearing a red shirt and denim overalls. White sneakers. He's in a stroller. Navy blue and blue-and-yellow-plaid trim.”
“Could he have crawled out of it?”
“He couldn't have climbed out on his own. He—” She turned to Melanie. “Max wasn't out of his stroller, was he?”
Melanie's face crumpled. “No, he was asleep. Just the way he was when you left him with me, Mom.” She pressed the fingers of both hands against her lips. “I'm so scared, Mom!”
“We'll find him, Mellie.” Jane squeezed the girl's shoulders gently before turning back to the police officers. “How could a baby in a stroller just disappear?” But even as she asked the question, she knew the answer. The stroller didn't just disappear. Somebody had been watching, and when the teenager and her friends became distracted by the fainting woman and the parade and the sheer frenzy of Mardi Gras, that someone had seized the moment to take her baby.
That was the moment when Jane's concern escalated into terror.
“As I mentioned, I've alerted all units in the area, Mrs. Madison,” Officer Cox said, touching the radio attached to her belt. “I'm sending out a B.O.L.O.”
“B.O.L.O?”
“It means be on the lookout.” She spoke briskly into her radio and received a squawked response that was unintelligible to Jane.
As they stood, isolated by the trauma of a missing child, people milled about enjoying Mardi Gras. Some were in costume, others not. Some were drunk, but most were simply reveling in the abandoned spirit of carnival. Jane's gaze strayed beyond Jackson Square where the river formed the east boundary of the French Quarter. Kidnapping a child on a day meant for celebration was obscene. Had she looked into the face of the person who'd taken Max while mingling with the crowd that day?
“Approximately how long has it been since you actually saw the baby, Mrs. Madison?”
Jane struggled to focus. “Twenty—maybe thirty minutes, no longer. I left to get food.” She looked at Melanie. “How long after I left did Christine leave, Mellie?”
“I don't know. Pretty soon, I guess. You weren't even out of sight.”
“Meaning it could be thirty minutes, give or take,” Officer Cox said. Without stating the obvious, both knew a person could travel pretty far in that much time. Even in this crowd.
“We've got to find him!” Jane felt panic rising in her chest. She stopped, drawing a breath to try to collect herself. With her hand on her heart, she spoke again. “I'm sorry. This is just . . . so—it can't be happening!”
“Please. Come with me.” Cox caught Jane's arm and gently guided her toward the cathedral with Melanie following behind. “Let's get out of the crowd.”
As they headed to the steps of the cathedral, she added in a reassuring voice, “I know you're worried, but there are hundreds of uniformed policemen on duty today. They'll call me if they spot Max. Meanwhile, let's try to reconstruct what happened. There could be a logical explanation.”
“Like what!” Jane cried.
“Someone could have wheeled it away by mistake. Many of these strollers look alike.” The possibility was so ludicrous that Jane didn't bother contradicting her. No parent on the planet accidentally claimed a stroller with a strange baby in it.
Jane's cell phone rang. She clicked to talk . . . hoping, hoping. Maybe, just maybe—“Hello!”
“It's Christine. I'm trying to find you. Where are you?”
“Near the steps of the cathedral. One of the officers is on horseback. You should be able to see him. But Christine, we can't find Max.”
“Are you serious? He's disappeared?”
“Yes. Oh, Christine . . .” Her voice broke. “I can't believe this.”
“I'm on my way, Jane. I'll find you. Meanwhile, I'll be praying.”
Turning from Jane, Cox spoke to both officers standing by. “Head over to the hotel where Max was last seen. Someone there might have noticed something.” The officers nodded and headed out. “I'm here, Jane.” Christine, breathless from running, slipped an arm around Jane's waist and gave her a reassuring hug. “Thank goodness I was able to find you.”
“This—” Jane turned to Officer Cox. “This is Christine. She was with Max and Melanie when I left to . . .” she trailed off, swallowing hard.
“Surely someone saw—” Christine broke off.
“We're working on that now,” Cox said. She refocused on Jane. “Are you certain Max was in his stroller when you left?”
“Yes, of course. I checked to see that he was sleeping. He's teething. I knew if he woke up, he'd be grumpy. He would want . . . me.” Her voice caught. No time to break down now. “So, yes, he was asleep in his stroller when I left,” she said emphatically.
“Mom, let's call Dad,” Melanie said. As always, when Melanie was distressed, she wanted her daddy. Christine slipped a comforting arm around the girl's waist. Jane gave Christine a grateful look. With every passing minute, Jane, too, felt the need for Kyle's support.
“Max was definitely asleep in his stroller when I left,” Christine said.
With the policewoman leading, they all hurried up the steps to the cathedral. The steps were shallow and worn from the footsteps of the faithful and wide enough to accommodate a crowd. A single look at the officer's expression, and people parted like the Red Sea. An attendant standing at the doors moved aside to let them enter.
The sudden hush inside felt almost eerie. Jane glanced toward the altar with its display of religious symbols and quickly turned to focus on Officer Cox.
For some time, Christine, who was active in her church, had been urging Jane to explore the lack of faith in her life, but she'd resisted. It wasn't that she objected on any philosophical grounds; it was just that she'd never found it particularly . . . relevant. Her life was full and . . . well, busy. On Sundays, rather than getting dressed and going to church, she liked to sit around, read the paper, have a leisurely brunch . . . resting up for the demands of the coming week.
She felt suddenly fearful that she might pay a price for her attitude.
“Try to recollect anything unusual you might have noticed, Melanie.” Cox spoke in a calm voice. Jane guessed her tone was intended to steady Melanie and focus her thoughts. “Was there anyone who appeared out of place or was suspicious looking?”
“I-I didn't see anything or anybody like that.” She turned to Anne-Marie. “Did you see anything?”
Her friend shrugged. “What was there to see? We were talking, we were all watching the parade and then—”
“And then Max just . . . disappeared!” Melanie said, her voice climbing in panic. “We have to do something!”
“Tell you what.” Cox touched Melanie's shoulder. “Let's sit down over here to talk. All of you.” With a tip of her chin, she indicated that Melanie's friends as well as Jane and Christine should follow. But Melanie shifted free of the cop's touch.
“We shouldn't be talking at all!” she cried. “We should be looking! We should block off stuff! We should go inside bars and any place that's open! We should stop people and ask if they've seen Max. Whoever took him will get away if we don't do something right now!”
“We are doing something, Melanie,” the policewoman said calmly. “Please. Sit.” She waited while the group reluctantly perched on the edge of a pew.
“The incident has been reported. Right now officers are on the lookout for Max, but we can't ?block off stuff.' It's not possible in this crowd.” Her tone turned brisk. “Now. Let's go over the past half hour once again to be sure we haven't overlooked something. You first, Mrs. Madison.”
Jane drew a deep breath. Inside she felt as agitated as Melanie, and she wondered how long she could keep from falling apart. “We stopped at the sidewalk in front of the hotel, beneath the balcony because it wasn't quite as jammed with people, to watch the parade. I left Max with Christine and Mellie to get some food. There were two friends with her.” She looked at Christine. “Right, Chris?”
“Yes. And the stroller was right there when I left to help inside the hotel.”
“You noticed nothing unusual?”
Christine paused to think. “No. But I was there only another minute or two after Jane went for food. I told Melanie to watch Max and left.”
Cox turned to Melanie. “Tell me exactly what happened from the time Mrs. O'Brian left.”
“It was—” Melanie began with a guilty look at her stepmother. “Some guys we knew were on a float that was passing by, and the parade stopped, right there. You know how it is, everything's moving and then it's not. It was only for a minute, Mom, honest.” Her lips trembled as she met Jane's eyes. “They said when the parade was over that they knew someone on Bourbon Street who had rented rooms with a balcony and they were going to watch the rest of the parades from up there. They invited us too. So then it started up again and they left and we turned around and Max was gone!”
“This is the first I've heard about boys on a float,” Jane said sternly. “Did you forget you were responsible for your baby brother?”
“No, Mom.” Melanie dashed at tears in her eyes. “I swear to you, it was only a few minutes.”
“But long enough for someone to steal Max.” Jane knew her words were hurtful, but her concern was for her baby now, not Melanie.
“Mom, please call Dad! Please. We need him. He'll know what to do.”
Until a few minutes ago, Jane had been hesitant about calling Kyle in case the whole thing turned out to be a false alarm. But now, with her stomach in a knot and her mouth dry with fear, she knew it wasn't a false alarm. She sent Officer Cox a questioning look.
“It might be a good idea to call your husband, Mrs. Madison.”
JANE REACHED KYLE AT his office on Poydras, but it was thirty minutes before he managed to get to the cathedral. They gathered on the front steps outside, where the crowd seemed to have lessened just a bit.
On the phone, she'd been unable to tell him much except that Max had disappeared. He'd wanted details, but there were none. Now his fierce gaze swept past Officer Cox's serious face and Melanie's tear-drenched cheeks to lock onto Jane.
“Has he been found?”
“No.”
He looked stunned. “There has to be a mistake.”
“We've looked—” Jane paused, knowing her voice wavered. “They've fanned out to search, but the crowds are monstrous. They haven't turned up anything. It's as if he disappeared into thin air.”
“That's impossible. He must still be here somewhere. Someone is bound to've seen him. You gave them a description of his stroller?” He glanced at the police officer.
“Of course, Kyle.” Jane rubbed her temple where a sharp pain throbbed.
Officer Cox moved to them, putting out her hand. “Mr. Madison, I'm Sharon Cox, the investigating officer.” With a brief nod, he shook her hand.
“Now that you're here, I'd like to suggest we go to the police substation. It's a better place to talk. Once we're there, I'll explain—”
“I don't think we should leave,” he said in a firm tone. “And what's to explain? We should be combing the area, knocking on doors, questioning people, looking into garages and courtyards.” Glancing outside, he raked a hand over his face. “This is a nightmare.”
“Everything you mention is being done, Mr. Madison. N.O.P.D. is on the scene—has been from the start—but we're hampered by the crowd. What we need now is to piece together exactly what happened.”
“How can you be certain Max is nowhere nearby?”
“I can't say that with certainty,” Sharon said. “But we've found no trace of him. No one has seen anything suspicious.” Like Kyle's, her glance strayed beyond the narthex to the reveling crowd outside. “At least they've seen nothing that might be construed as suspicious beyond ordinary Mardi Gras madness.”
“It's all my fault, Dad!” Melanie cried suddenly.
Jane knew Mellie needed reassurance from Kyle. She needed to hear him say he understood her fear, that he wasn't angry with her. She needed a hug from her daddy. But from the grim expression on his face it didn't look as if she was going to get any such thing. “Max was with Melanie and her friends, Kyle,” Jane explained, trying to keep the tremor from her voice.
“With Melanie?” He frowned darkly. “Why was he with Melanie? Where were you?”
“I went to get us something to eat from a vendor . . . Julie and Anne-Marie were with them—”
“You left our son in the care of a bunch of teenagers to get junk food?”
Melanie made a distressed sound. “Dad, just listen. Please.”
“Hush, Melanie.” Kyle waved the teenager quiet, keeping his gaze laser sharp on Jane. “I'm waiting to hear what happened,” he told her.
“You can't say anything worse to me than I've been saying to myself, Kyle. The kids were hungry. I went to get food. Christine was with them. It never occurred to me that anything like this could happen.”
“Christine?” He turned to glance at Jane's friend then back at Jane.
“There was a medical emergency,” Jane said. “Christine lent assistance. She—” Jane stopped, not wanting to cast blame on Christine or Melanie.
Kyle's steely gaze turned to his daughter. “So how could Max disappear if you were watching him?”
Melanie was crying again. “We—we got talking and suddenly the parade stopped and this float was right by us. There were some guys we knew from school on it. They were laughing and goofing off and everything. They threw us tons of beads and stuff. It was just for a few minutes, Dad,” she said, pleading for understanding. “I know I shouldn't have taken my eyes off Max! But I thought he was safe on the sidewalk right beside me!”
“Clearly he wasn't beside you,” Kyle said.
“But he was only a few feet away, honestly.” She put both hands to her cheeks. “I mean, I don't know how long it was, minutes really, but when we looked, he was gone!”
Jane slipped an arm around the girl's shoulders, trying to console her, while inside she was sick with terror.
Kyle stood with his hands on his hips. “Can you estimate how much time passed before you noticed your baby brother was gone?”
When Melanie seemed unable to talk, Cox spoke up quietly. “We've covered all that, Mr. Madison. The parade stalled for about five minutes, so I don't see how it could have been much longer than that.”
“But more than long enough for someone to take the stroller and melt into the crowd, then head for only God knows where,” Kyle said in a flat tone.
“Possibly,” the officer conceded.
“I'm sorry! I'm sorry!” Melanie cried. “I didn't mean this to happen. I'm so sorry.”
Jane drew the girl closer. “We know, Mellie. And we'll find him. You'll see. We will.” She looked up into Kyle's eyes, her chin tilted. “We will!”
They all turned to look as the cop who'd been mounted on horseback appeared, dismounting and moving reverently toward them. His glance skimmed the Madisons before moving to Sharon Cox. “N.O.P.D. has found the stroller.”
Jane pressed her fist to her heart. “Oh, thank God!”
The cop gave her a sympathetic look. “I'm sorry, ma'am. The stroller was abandoned . . . up on the Riverwalk.” In one hand he held a tiny sneaker. “This is all we found. There was no sign of the baby.”
© 2010 KAREN YOUNG

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Excerpted from Missing Max by Karen Young Copyright © 2010 by Karen Young.


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Wednesday, July 14, 2010

I'm training for a marathon!

Captain's Log, Stardate 07.14.2010

This should not come as a surprise to you guys since I already blogged about how the Jeff Galloway Run-Walk method has enabled me to run injury-free and has also made me looooooove running!

I had mentioned the Disneyworld marathon in passing (only half-seriously) but then here's what happened.

My parents wanted us to visit them in Hawaii for Thanksgiving, but tickets are something like $700 round trip PER PERSON (for Christmas, it's up to $900 round trip per person). Grandma offered to give us airline miles for one ticket, but we'd still have to come up with one ticket and Captain Caffeine had to take off work.

I blogged earlier about talking with my Dad about the Jeff Galloway method, since Dad has been running since I was in middle school, and he was pretty excited to hear about me running, too.

The next time I called home, the first thing Dad said was that I should run the Honolulu Marathon since it’s in early December.

I wasn’t sure I’d be ready by then, since I’m only on week 7 of the marathon training program, but then I calculated it. I’ll have finished the program by the week of the Honolulu Marathon. It’s a sign!

Also, did I mention airfare prices are only about $425 dollars if you fly during the first two weeks of December?!

ALSO I figure that if I blog publicly about running the marathon, it’s motivation to actually DO it, right????

Captain Caffeine won’t be able to take off work since he’s got a project in December, but I’ll be able to fly to Hawaii for about a week before the marathon to acclimate to the heat and humidity.

I hope I can do it!

Tuesday, July 13, 2010

This week’s Street Team Challenge

Captain's Log, Stardate 07.13.2010

For all you wonderful folks on my Street Team, here’s a special challenge for you this week!

The first TWO people who email me a picture of a person they gave my bookmark(s) to get one of two pretty Japanese fan magnets:



I got them from this cute shop in San Jose Japantown whose name I can’t remember anymore. LOL Actually, you can thank my mom for them because I was going to buy them but she insisted on buying them for me. So, thanks Mom!

My email is camy {at} camy tang {dot} com. Also, if you give my bookmarks to your children or spouse and send me a picture, IT DOESN’T COUNT unless your kids and/or spouse are no longer living with you.

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Monday, July 12, 2010

2010 St. Louis - ICRS

Captain's Log, Stardate 07.12.2010

If you're on Facebook, you'll see I posted pictures from ICRS, but in case you haven't see them yet, check them out on my Scrapbook! (I put them on my scrapbook in case blog viewers have a hard time viewing webpages with lots of pictures.)

Sunday, July 11, 2010

Thanks from Alison Strobel

Hey there! I just wanted to say thanks to my fine blog hostess and to her readers. I have been really excited to see how many people are thinking of picking up the book because of the reviews they read during the blog tour. And thank you to everyone who entered the contest! I'll be drawing a winner on July 18 and posting it on my blog. If you haven't stopped by my blog or website yet, I hope you'll pop over sometime and say hi in the comments or on the guest book. Also, if you're interested in hearing about my next releases and any other exciting news that happens to come up, please sign up to receive my announcements--the sign-up is on my website. I have another novel coming out in September, two more next year, and two children's books that my husband and I wrote (the first of which comes out August 1), so there will be plenty of news coming, and I try to host contests now and then on my blog, too.

Thanks again! And if you do decide to pick up The Weight of Shadows and give it a read, please come tell me what you thought of it. I mean it. :)

~Alison

Read an excerpt of The Weight of Shadows here.

Saturday, July 10, 2010

Excerpt - Cowboy for a Rainy Afternoon by Stephen Bly

An excerpt from 
COWBOY FOR A RAINY AFTERNOON
By Stephen Bly

Summary:
A 10-year-old boy with red straw cowboy hat, cap gun, and silver-painted wooden bullets. Six story-telling, cribbage playing old cowboys. A ’49 Plymouth with open trunk. A damsel in distress. All the fixings for a summer’s day adventure at the Matador Hotel in 1954 Albuquerque.

Maybe you weren’t born 100 years too late!


CHAPTER 1


The Matador Hotel died on July 5th, 1965, but they didn’t bother burying it until last fall.

New Mexico heat blanketed Albuquerque that July like too many covers in a stuffy cabin.  The kind of day that you sweat from the inside out and feel sticky dirt in places that you don’t ponder much except in the shower.  I reckon that four-bladed overhead fan that squeaked like an unfed cat failed to console Shorty McGuire.    

Doc Boyce said he passed on durin’ the night, but no one discerned it until they observed the empty back table at the Round-Up Café.  For the last nineteen years of his life, Shorty lived in a second-floor room at The Matador.  At straight up 6:00 a.m. ever’ mornin’ he ate two eggs fried hard under the faded picture of Theodore Roosevelt leading the Rough Riders up San Juan Hill.

As a boy, I calculated that Shorty McGuire and the others must be pushing a hundred-years-old when I met them for the first time in 1954.

I reckon I surmised wrong.

The Albuquerque Herald  reported that Hadley (Shorty) McGuire was only 86 when he died on that July day in 1965.  The Herald  is right most of the time.

As the last of that bunch at the Matador, there was no one left to take his trappings, so Whip Johnson and me cleaned out Shorty’s goods a few days after his funeral.  Whip managed the hotel in the 60s for his Uncle Durwood Johnson who gained some fame in the Southwest on the rodeo circuit after the war.  He won the hotel on a bet on a black half-thoroughbred stallion down in Magdalena.

The floor of Shorty’s little room with one four-pane slide-up window was carpeted solid with six to eight inches of newspapers, not a one newer than 1939.  He claimed that cowboyin’ didn’t provide the time to read much, so he saved them for his retirement.  I never did know if he got caught up.

We didn’t have the nerve to give his tattered clothing to the Rescue Mission, so we chucked them into the hotel incinerator.  We crated his boots, wooly chaps and battered Stetson, then donated them to the state museum.   I had a notion they would want to display the gear of an old-time cowboy.  But they stored them in a back room for a few years, then sold them at an auction to raise money for a modern art statue that looks like the scrap-iron pile out behind my barn.  If I’d known they were selling Shorty’s belongings, I’d have bought those suckers myself and buried them, rather than let some car dealer in Denver drive off with ‘em.  But that’s the way the past is.  You can’t hang on to it all.  What survives gets stolen by strangers who have no blasted idea of what they hold in their hands.

The tobacco-stained furniture in Shorty’s room belonged to the hotel, but Whip decided to replace it all and re-carpet.  So they moved in newer furniture, but I don’t think the room was ever repainted.  Whip and me always thought that room smelled like Lordsburg, but that might be its location on the south side of the hotel, facing the Santa Fe tracks.

I never went back to the hotel after that day.  The hippies ran it in the early 70s, then some drug dealers.  I think one of them big moving companies bought the place and used it for storage for a decade or two before they tore it down last year.  All them red bricks got shipped to the west side for deluxe estate fencing around an upscale gated community.  I hear they decided to build urban condos on the old hotel site for rich city folks, but I can’t figure what kind of people would want to live in downtown Albuquerque. 
 
At least, not nowadays.

I still have Shorty’s rim-fire saddle hangin’ in my tack room.   It was one of the first ones Estaban Chavez built, when he still had that shop behind the Chinese laundry in Las Cruces.  Lots of folks have wanted to buy it over the years, but it doesn’t belong to me.  Some day Shorty’s kin will show up wantin’ his things, and I’ll have it ready.  I keep the leather oiled.  Shorty died almost forty years ago, but I’ll hang onto it for him.

That’s the way things are done around this part of the country.

It’s one of the lessons I learned in the lobby of the Matador Hotel.
Excerpt from Cowboy For A Rainy Afternoon by Stephen Bly, Copyright©2010 by Stephen Bly. All rights reserved. 

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 Comments about previous Stephen Bly novels:
"I have always been a fan of Louis L'Amour but I must say your book is as good if not better than anything of his. I shall remain a fan of Stephen Bly." --Jimmy Dickens, Grand Ole Opry 

“Bly offers a kinder, gentler Western that should appeal to fans of Louis L’Amour.”  -- Library Journal

Friday, July 09, 2010

Street Team book list Excerpt - WILDFLOWER BRIDE by Mary Connealy

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Wildflower Bride
by
Mary Connealy


Welcome to the wilds of Montana, where humor, romance, and suspense ride the range. Glowing Sun, a white woman raised by the Flathead tribe, has vague memories of her former life, including a name—Abby Lind. When she’s forced to sever all links with her adopted family, Abby wonders if she’ll ever find a home again. Tenderhearted Wade Sawyer, responsible for Abby’s survival during the village massacre, convinces the knife-wielding woman to return with him to the Sawyer Ranch, never realizing danger lurks behind every corner. Can they survive long enough to fall in love?

Excerpt of chapter one:

Chapter 1
Montana Territory, 1877
Gunfire jerked Wade Sawyer awake.
His feet hit the floor before he made a conscious decision to move. Grabbing his rifle mounted over the door, he rammed his back to the wall, jacked a shell into the chamber, and listened.
Another shot fired, then another. The volley went on and on. Many guns blazing.
Even as he figured that out, he realized the gunfire wasn’t close. Wade yanked the shack’s door open. In the heavy woods and the dim light of approaching dawn, there wasn’t much to see, but he knew the ruckus wasn’t aimed at him. It had another target, and from the direction of the sound, he knew what. . .or rather who.
Glowing Sun. And her village.
Already dressed because he slept in his clothes, he yanked his boots on. Snagging his heavily lined buckskin coat off the peg on the wall, he dashed toward his horse, yanking the jacket on while he ran.
Living in a meadow Wade had penned off, his chestnut gelding had his head up, alerted by the shooting, staring toward the noise. Wade lassoed the horse and had leather slapped onto the animal within two minutes. Wade swung up and slid his rifle into the boot of the saddle. Letting loose a yell that’d make a rebel soldier proud, Wade kicked his horse and charged toward death.
The shots kept ringing, echoing from the Flathead village set in the meadow high on the mountaintop.
His horse was game, and terror goaded Wade to risk the treacherous trails at a breakneck pace.
But it was too far. Racing up a deer trail, he knew, no matter how fast he rode and how much he risked, he’d be too late. He was already too late when the shooting started.
The hail of bullets ended. Wade galloped on. The weapons falling silent only made Wade surer that whatever damage was being done was over. In the gray of dawn, that silence ate at him, interrupted only by his horse’s thundering hoofbeats. He reached the base of the rise surrounding the Flathead village and tore up the mountainside.
A horse skylined itself, a masked rider atop it. A struggling woman thrown over his lap, screaming, clawing, kicking. A blond woman dressed in Indian garb, her hair catching the rising sun. Screaming as only Glowing Sun could scream.
She was still alive. Wade felt a wash of relief mixed with rage and terror as he goaded his horse forward. He could rescue her. Save her. He was in time.
Wade closed the distance, his horse blowing hard as it galloped up the rugged hillside, hooves thundering. Still a long upward quarter of a mile away, Wade wasn’t close enough yet to open fire. Afraid he’d hit Glowing Sun, Wade drew his rifle and carefully fired over the man’s head.
At the instant he pulled the trigger, three masked riders topped the hill, riding at full speed.
Wade’s bullet slammed the first one backward. The man shouted. His horse reared. A splash of bright red bloomed on the man’s shirt. Grabbing at the saddle horn, the outlaw showed great skill by keeping his seat. But he lost control of his mount and plowed into the horse bearing Glowing Sun and her abductor.
Shocked and sickened to have shot a man, Wade grimly raced on toward Glowing Sun.
The masked man just behind the one Wade had wounded swung his gun at Wade in a way that struck Wade as awkward or somehow wrong. The shooter hesitated; then, without firing a shot, he abandoned the fight, whirled, and raced his horse back the way he’d come.
The third man, skinny, but beyond that unrecognizable behind his kerchief, turned to face Wade’s gunfire. The instant he saw Wade, he turned coyote like the other outlaw and ran, leaving behind his wounded friend and the man who had Glowing Sun.
Cowards.
Glowing Sun gave an impossible twist of her body and an earsplitting shriek. She kicked herself over backward, landing a bare foot in the man’s face.
He must have yanked on the reins, because the horse reared, neighing and fighting the bit, skidding and spinning. As the horse threatened to go over backward, the man threw himself to the ground.
Glowing Sun went with him, screaming but not with fear or pain. It sounded like fury, killing-mean rage. And it sounded strong. Wade prayed she hadn’t been hurt.
Wade, still galloping full ahead up the long slope, leveled his rifle one-handedly and fired again, even higher this time.
The man Wade had shot gained control of his horse, wheeled, and dashed after the other bandits.
The fallen man leapt to his feet, still holding on to Glowing Sun. Then Wade realized the masked man wasn’t holding her. . .he was fighting her off.
Shouting Flathead words Wade didn’t understand, she had one hand jammed into the man’s throat as she slashed with her knife.
With the sharp smack of his backhand on Glowing Sun’s face, the man broke her grip. Her blade slashed, catching a flare of light from the first beams of the rising sun, cutting the man across his arm and chest. The outlaw yowled in pain.
Staggering back, Glowing Sun screamed an Indian battle cry and dove at him. She caught his kerchief and pulled it down. Then her fingers slipped. fell and slid down the steep hillside on her back.
Wade fired again, his horse thundering forward.
Stay alive. Stay alive.
He’d be there in seconds. But one bullet, one slash of a blade could rob the world—and Wade --- of Glowing Sun’s courage and beauty and indomitable spirit.
The outlaw jerked his gun free and shot at Wade. There was no blast. The gun jammed or was empty. Wade thought of the volley of gunfire that had awakened him and suspected the man had emptied his gun already.
Fury twisting his face, the man, his mask dangling around his neck, gave Wade one wild look. Wade saw his face plainly. Blood poured over his thick black beard and down the front of his heavy sheepskin coat. The outlaw snatched up his horse’s reins and threw himself into the saddle, and in two leaping strides, his horse vanished over the rim, following the other outlaws into the Flathead valley.
Wade reined hard as he reached Glowing Sun. His horse nearly sat down as it slid to a stop. Wade swung to the ground and raced to Glowing Sun’s side.
Blood soaked the front of her dress, coated her hands. She jumped to her feet as he got there.
“Where are you hurt?” Frantic, Wade tried to force her onto the ground.
She fought to stay on her feet and slashed the knife.
He knew her well enough to duck. “It’s me! Glowing Sun, it’s Wade. Let me help you!” He knew what he must look like. He hadn’t shaved all winter or cut his hair. Or bathed for that matter. He had no business expecting her to recognize the wild man he’d become.
She froze. Her knife was raised to strike. Her eyes locked on his face. “Wade?” The rage switched to relief. The knife fell from her fingers and she launched herself into Wade’s arms.
He staggered down the hill a few feet as he caught her hard against his chest.
Dear God, dear God, thank You. She’s alive. Holding her feels like a taste of heaven. Thank You. Thank You.
Wade’s head cleared from the knee-weakening relief. “Where are you bleeding? Were you shot? Did those men hurt you?” She felt vital and strong in his arms, not like a wounded woman should. His hands went to her shoulders, to push her back so he could see where she’d been hurt.
Before he could accomplish that, the smell hit him. Wade whirled with her still in his arms. Her feet flew out as she swung from his neck. He carried her as he dashed to the crest of the rise to see. . .
Devastation.
Smoke and bodies.
The tepees in flames.
Glowing Sun’s village laid to waste, people sprawled every-where. A dozen, maybe two dozen, all still. As death.
Gasping in horror, Wade looked at the village.
He’d made a habit of riding up here through the winter. This was the summer hunting grounds for Glowing Sun’s people, and he’d watched and waited for her to return from her village’s winter camp. He knew, even as he’d done it, the behavior was too much like what he’d done to Cassie Dawson a few years ago. But he couldn’t seem to help it. He’d needed to see Glowing Sun.
As spring had come on, he’d been more careful. Ghosting his way to the rim to study the high mountain valley to see if the Flatheads had returned. Only a week ago he’d ridden up here to find they’d come back. He’d dropped behind a scrub pine and watched until he caught a glimpse of her, alive and well and as beautiful as a dream. Then he’d slunk away like a low-down coyote.
Now, movement caught his eye. The men who’d taken Glowing Sun galloped far across the shallow bowl where this small group of Flatheads, roaming far from their reservation home, spent their summers. Wade’s hand clutched at his gun, but he was too far away for a shot.
A shot. He’d shot a man. His stomach churned. He fought nausea.
A wail of torment from Glowing Sun stopped him from dropping to his knees and emptying his stomach. He wanted to get on his horse and run from what he’d done. But he couldn’t leave Glowing with this devastation.
A flash of Glowing Sun fighting for her life ran vividly through his mind. What choice did he have but to fight for her? But it left him heartsick.
Then he looked again at the smoldering ruins of the peaceful village. Men, women, children. Killed by those four men. They’d come with rifles and handguns. The Indians were, more often than not, unarmed, at least unarmed beyond knives and spears. The Flatheads were a peaceful people. Their meager weapons were nothing against heavily armed men with repeating rifles.
Wade should be proud he’d shot one of those murdering scum. He should want to kill them all. The shame of that thought made his stomach twist again, and he thought he might vomit. He knew being able to kill wasn’t the sign of a man. He’d grown enough in his faith to understand that, but his common sense was fighting a battle with his upbringing.
“Why did this happen?” Wade asked God aloud.
Glowing Sun answered. “A massacre.” She still clung to him, but she’d lifted her head and turned to look at the butchery. She’d spoken in Wade’s language. He’d taught her English, or rather helped her rediscover her first tongue.
Wade blocked her view of the nightmare by turning and putting his body between her and the destruction. Thinking of her distracted him from his nausea.
Before he could check her for injuries, a cry of pain rose from the village nearly half a mile away in the valley.
Whirling to follow the sound, his weak stomach forgotten, he released Glowing Sun and grabbed at his horse’s reins. He jumped on, held his hand out to her. Her hand slapped into his with a sharp clap. He swung her up in front of him, remembering how she’d liked to ride.
They raced down the hill and waded into a bloodbath.
Glowing Sun snagged the reins away and swung her leg over the horse’s head. She jumped to the ground before the chestnut stopped and raced toward the loudest cries of pain.
Wade followed, relieved to see her moving and unhurt despite the blood.
Glowing Sun dropped to her knees. “Mama!”
Wade’s stomach twisted with dread as he saw two gunshot wounds bleeding from the woman’s chest. The woman opened her eyes, but they seemed unfocused. She grabbed at Glowing as if fighting her off, screaming.
“No, Mama. Let us help you.”
The older woman kept screaming, fighting.
“Flathead, Glowing Sun. Speak Flathead to her.”
Glowing Sun looked up, confused.
“You’re speaking English.” Wade pulled off his coat then tore off his shirt and grabbed his knife out of its sheath in his boot.
Glowing Sun shook her head then turned back to the woman.
Ten. . .Mama. . .Ten.”
Ten? Did that mean “mother”? Wade should have learned the language of the tribes around him. Why had he never tried? His father hated the idea. Indians were to be driven off, not treated as neighbors.
Glowing Sun spoke in the guttural tribal language.
The injured woman calmed and seemed to recognize Glowing Sun. Instead of screaming, she began a chant.
“We’ve got to get the bleeding stopped.” Wade dropped beside Glowing Sun. The chances of saving Glowing Sun’s mother were slim, but they had to try. With a loud tearing sound, Wade’s shirt split under his blade. Wade handed strips to Glowing Sun, who pressed them against the gushing wounds.
Glowing Sun began to pray in English, frantic petitions to God for mercy. Wade glanced up and saw love in Glowing Sun’s eyes. The kind of love Wade had known for his mother. A long-lost love.
Wade knew nothing of the Flathead language, but to him the woman’s chant was a dirge. To the extent he could understand, it sounded wordless, just syllables of mourning.
He joined Glowing Sun in her prayers, asking for a miracle, because only a miracle would spare this woman.
“God, please spare her life. Guide our hands. Wisdom, Lord, give us wisdom to know what to do, how to help.”
The two of them worked in desperation, one on each side of the stout woman. Stemming the bleeding, binding the wounds. Long black braids, streaked heavily with gray, hung limp. The woman’s dark eyes seemed to look beyond the sky. A cry rang from her lips. Her eyes flickered closed, but the dirge continued.
“Press harder.” Wade shoved a wad of cloth on top of the one soaked with blood. He moved Glowing Sun’s crimson-stained fingers.
The woman didn’t react to what had to be excruciating pain. She continued her death chant.
Glowing Sun’s mother’s song became weaker, quieter, sadder.
At last the noise ended. Wade felt the moment life left the woman and her spirit left her body.
With a cry of grief, Glowing Sun stopped her futile medical treatment and flung herself on the woman.
Wade eased back, staying close but knowing nothing he could say or do would help. Only then did he hear other moans. Other cries for help.
He lurched to his feet, his knees numb from the long time on the ground. How long had they worked on the dying woman? Were there others they’d neglected in their futile fight to save Glowing Sun’s Flathead mother?
He hated to leave Glowing Sun. He couldn’t insist she come. He faltered. “I’ve got to see if there are others who need help.”
She didn’t raise her eyes. Instead she started her own death chant.
Without even waiting to see if she heard him over her cries of grief, he turned and rushed toward the sound of pain.
Excerpted from WILDFLOWER BRIDE: Montana Marriages, Book 3 © Copyright 2010 by Mary Connealy.

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